Have you ever been stuck in the wrong patch if you have this is a story like that it all started in some random person's Blueberry patch there was a… “will you guess please, No, ok let me carry on with my story”. Solitary, juicy Berry named Squishy (Squishy is a human berry), he is with his friend named Blueberry and his Blueberry family (Squishy was adopted) “Are you adopted?”
They were having some Breakfast but from out of the shadows they interrupted by a… BANG! “be quiet son! sorry”, they were interrupted by a GIANT RASPBERRY named RASPBERRY he was sent to de juice Squishy and the Blues so they jumped down the toilet and ran for it and ran and ran and ran in the Sewage .
We went to the end and Mr Blueberry said “my blue is sick” so Squishy said “let’s take him to Disneyland then”. They traveled back and went up the ladder to go to Disneyland they popped out of the top just in time for the next ride, they were lucky because no one was there. They were one half ,three quarters and 2 paces away when the unmanageable, the incredible, the unbelievable happened DISNEYLAND WAS CLOSED!!!!!!
They got back in the sewage and hopped away into the darkness of tomorrow as they drowned in their dreams of today. But out of the blue they were fritte of Raspberry dragging them away in their nightmares. So they start to walk and come to a ladder so they start to climb, when they reached the top they all went a little bluer they were surrounded. Nowhere to run nowhere to hide they have to face the truth of being de juiced, but Mr Blue had other plans in mind and how do I know that you ask? I know because he dived under and screamed CHAHOW!!! At the top of his lungs.
Raspberry was very VERY confused. They scattered while they could, Raspberry didn’t know which one to go for and he was SO confused that he fainted. Meanwhile Squishy and the blueberries were contacting each other on their juice pulps and meet up at the lollie shop on the other side of town. They had a snack while plotting a plan in the jelly bean jar, ten minutes later they were having their last licorice stick and bounced their way out of the shop with the rest of the jelly bean jar. They went up in to the hills and went in to a mysterious cave so the can’t be seen they went pretty far down and set their base when they were ambushed by an avalanche of boulders they were trapped with nowhere to run and nowhere to snack…
Too Be Continued
Hi Kurt!
ReplyDeleteNice narrative! I really like how you even added a fancy title, as well as using onomatopoeia. Another thing that I liked was how you used some pretty big words to describe your scenes better. I have a question though, do you enjoy writing stories?
Keep blogging!
Alex