Wednesday, March 21, 2018

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3 comments:

  1. Hi Kurt, I'm Miki from Panmure Bridge School. I like your DLO because it was easy to understand and how to draw the Tui. I also really like your Tui. I think you put lots of effort to make this. Keep up your awesome work!

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  2. Hello Kurt
    Nice picture! I really like how you found a way to show the colours of your Tui in detail, another thing I liked was how you explained how someone could make it in depth. The only thing I'd like you to do differently is explain the reasons for making the Tui, was it a task or did you just decide to make it? Other than that, great job, keep working hard!
    Alex

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  3. Hello Kurt, my name is Viva I attend Panmure Bridge School. The reason for why I really like your google drawing is because you've informed and talked about the detail and colors you've used. The other thing I like about it was because you've used a rhetorical question in the beginning of the paragraph/piece of writing. Looking forward to seeing more of your work!

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